I hold a degree in Theatre.  I appreciate your own artistic approach to your writing and I wish you continued success in whatever form you choose to take it.  However, throwing profanity in anything, comedy or drama, just for the hell of it is...well...neither funny nor intelligent.  That is not an attack on you at all.  Just my own observation from having my own history in performance art and seeing how culture as a whole views "funny" or "comedy".  Again, you a very talented writer and wish you the best in whatever road it leads you to.

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